Revised Passage/Word: ..Remember?' Rosita stepped back uneasily from the stranger she was defending only moments
earlier. A creepy chill raced down the back of her spine. 'You're really..

Revised Passage/Word: The setting sun was evidence of the day's quick departure.

Revised Passage/Word: 'Nothing really' reponded the professor. But turning suddenly, with one brow raised and dawning realisation in his eyes, he reconsidered. 'Well actually, there is one thing that you and Masilo can do for me.'

Revised Passage/Word: Although the professor's reasons seemed credible, his abrupt manner and hurried speech left the group feeling that there was more to this need to leave than he had stated. They were partly right too, as the professor had developed a resolute desire to in no way interfere with this unblemished environment.

Revised Passage/Word: The woman looked toward the forest. Her motioning to the man alongside indicated that the observers had been spotted.

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Revised Passage/Word: The travelers crept closer, crouching.

About Amy P:
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Revised Passage/Word: ..interjected Rosita. 'You sound like you're going to wind up on their dinner table.'

About Henry P: Dinners waiting..
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Revised Passage/Word: Rosita and the couple stood transfixed, their lighted eyes reflecting the dying flames of the first fire of the New World.

About Enigma: Real name Roberta S. Love the site.
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Revised Passage/Word: The weary group burst forward with renewed energy and quickened the pace.