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THREE CHEERS FOR PeteS - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 20 PETE
AGE: 31 COUNTRY: AUS STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 16

Original Passage/Word: ..controlled time.

Revised Passage/Word: ..controlled time, while Masilo was hoping to get to know this world and the couple more.

About Pete S: Very interesting "Pelican Brief"
The Editor's Comment: Yeah, good movie hey...

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THREE CHEERS FOR JackL - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 21 JACK
AGE: 23 COUNTRY: AUS STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 10

Original Passage/Word: ..the essence of..

Revised Passage/Word: ..the cornerstone of..

About JackL: .."essence" is just not strong enough in this context.
The Editor's Comment: Glad to see you're all jacked up.

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THREE CHEERS FOR PatrickL - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 22 PATRICK
AGE: 22 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 19

Original Passage/Word: ..possibility. 'Allow me to..

Revised Passage/Word: ..possibility. 'Wait a moment' came an intrusive voice. The professor turned towards Lucifer. 'Allow me to..

About Patrick L: This submiision was done with the help of
my dear inebriated friends. Submitted for fluidity!
The Editor's Comment: Thanks for that refreshing commentary.

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THREE CHEERS FOR DavidJ - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 23 DAVID
AGE: 27 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 14

Original Passage/Word: The professor bumbled.. speech.

Revised Passage/Word: Not a strong public speaker, the professor notified everyone that he would simply speak his mind.

About David J: I love painting and sport.
The Editor's Comment: No comment.

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THREE CHEERS FOR PaulP - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 24 PAUL
AGE: 18 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 13

Original Passage/Word: ..the reversal chamber.

Revised Passage/Word: ..the reversal chamber. It offered a feeling of emotional comfort and protection against the foreign world outside.

About Paul P:
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HALL OF FAME 25 SAM
AGE: 17 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 18

Original Passage/Word: ..I answered! I was part..

Revised Passage/Word: ..I answered! You can't travel back to the begining of creation and leave me out of the picture. That wouldn't be fair now, would it?' he taunted. 'I was part..

About Sam J:
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THREE CHEERS FOR JaneK - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 26 JANE
AGE: 21 COUNTRY: AUS STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 19

Original Passage/Word: Everyone in.. silent.

Revised Passage/Word: A mist of silence blanketed the chamber.

About Jane K: I felt you needed a more artistic approach to the story; at least at certain points..
The Editor's Comment: Keep sending us your input.

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HALL OF FAME 27 MARY
AGE: 30 COUNTRY: Canada STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 11

Original Passage/Word: The professor.. fruit.

Revised Passage/Word: The professor bit off a sizeable chunk of the nourishing fruit and savoured the taste;
the intense concentrations showing on his wrinkly, old face.

About Mary ST: Great stuff.. looking forward to theFuture.
The Editor's Comment: None.

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THREE CHEERS FOR DeborahL - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 28 DEBORAH
AGE: 19 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 19

Original Passage/Word: 'We must.. late.'

Revised Passage/Word: 'It's time to close the door.'

About Deborah L: None.
The Editor's Comment: None.

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HALL OF FAME 29 MELISSA
AGE: 25 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 14

Original Passage/Word: And that was it.

Revised Passage/Word: And that was it. The professor, who didn't have a way with words or tact in speeches, had decided their future.

About Melissa D: I'm the amateur writer while my husband is the family comedian - Hope you print my submission before his!
The Editor's Comment: In the interests of marital bliss..

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