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THREE CHEERS FOR SarahJ - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 30 SARAH
AGE: 22 COUNTRY: AUS STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 10

Original Passage/Word: ..interjected Rosita.

Revised Passage/Word: ..interjected Rosita. Ho Ling and Masilo concurred.

About Sarah J: This, I feel, keeps all the characters in sight.
The Editor's Comment: Glad to see that.

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THREE CHEERS FOR CraigM - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 31 CRAIG
AGE: 23 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 18

Original Passage/Word: ..he asked. 'Did you just..

Revised Passage/Word: ..he asked. 'Wait a minute' asked a now timid Rosita, swallowing the lump in her throat. 'Did you just..

About Craig M: None
The Editor's Comment: None.

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THREE CHEERS FOR CrystalT - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 32 CRYSTAL
AGE: 21 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 16

Original Passage/Word: Always seeming.. them.

Revised Passage/Word: Mystery it seemed, was the driving force in the life of this imposing character.

About Crystal T:
The Editor's Comment: No comment.

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HALL OF FAME 33 JANE
AGE: 21 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 12

Original Passage/Word: ..youthful professor Ranjith.

Revised Passage/Word: ..youthful professor Ranjith, looking in disbelief at his arms and absorbing the results.

About Jane P:
The Editor's Comment:

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THREE CHEERS FOR RaquelB - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 34 RAQUEL
AGE: 20 COUNTRY: UK STOTY: #1 TEMPLATE: 19

Original Passage/Word: in the future.' 'Considering that..

Revised Passage/Word: in the future.' 'Damn! I wish I had considered that,' retorted the professor sarcastically. 'Considering that..

About Raquel B: Include this for greater coherrence.
The Editor's Comment: Sure will.

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THREE CHEERS FOR TraceyT - YEAH! YEAH! YEAH!

HALL OF FAME 35 TRACEY
AGE: 19 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 17

Original Passage/Word: ..pretentious protest. I suppose it..

Revised Passage/Word: ..pretentious protest. 'Travelling along in this contraption of yours... it seemed an intriguing option. I suppose it..

About TraceyT: Ooooh!.. make me famous (..just kiddding.)
The Editor's Comment: None.

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HALL OF FAME 36 KURT
AGE: 19 COUNTRY: USA STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 20

Original Passage/Word: ..to the city.

Revised Passage/Word: ..to the city, the newcomers being carried by eager hands in carriages like kings of old.

About KurtG:
The Editor's Comment: None.

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HALL OF FAME 37 SCOTT
AGE: 38 COUNTRY: UK STORY: #1 TEMPLATE: 37

Original Passage/Word: ..up to leave. 'Come along..

Revised Passage/Word: ..up to leave. �Well professor...� she kidded �yah sure that there made a valid attempt to rid the world of evil, yah know. But yah ought ter have tried beating me at a game o� Scrabble first...� The forlorn..

About ScottM:
The Editor's Comment: None.

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